The first half of book II, with the same view point characters as book I, has already been through several revisions and is close to done; but the second half of book II….!! I changed the view point characters to Gloria and Stephen (secondary characters in the first book) and am revising the chapters as I work through it. Now Dasimbe and Daniel become secondary, but still important, characters.
This is hard work!! Whole scenes, actions sequences, and the accompanying dialogue, change; while keeping to the main story line which is in the rough draft, and the “voices” are different. (Weird, hearing different voices in your head as you work.) I hope this works. It will, it must. I still haven’t decided on a title for this venture into the warlocks’ futuristic city in its icy domain, the High Tors, with its ethereal air fairy neighbors.